week 5.2 (week 7) animation

I decide to work on the emotion of depression rather than loneliness just after the class on week 5. I sent an animation footage to my tutor through e-mail. 

Feedback from my tutor:

1.Consider cropping both images more, the large expanse of black could compromise the tension you want to create.

2.The fading in and out of this image feels a bit contrived so you could lose it as with the zoom. 

The transition between both images is the crux of the message so be clear what you want to achieve so you don’t delete the story and impact. The video first references despair then morphs into anguish.

3. Reconsider the client. Consider something other than the obvious mental health, someone that your audience would connect with but wouldn’t usually associate this narrative with. It could be for the Police/Army or an insurance company - the impact of losing something very important to you