Week 8 video testing &feedback

I choose the line:
it is morning because things to be done line up in front of me and say, Look here

I choose this one because it can contain quiet different moods according to the situation. I came up with the idea earlier this week. I was going to combine the two videos into one. the contrast of the two footage suggest that a particular situation could be a cause for optimism or pessimism. it is the answer of the question: "Is the glass half empty or half full?" 

Feedback:

The videos here are lack of tone of the words. In another word, the word is supposed to be the main character but not the music. Don't create things that is just beautiful but sort of meaningless. 

The thing we are creating should make people want to see. I think the video is just not attractive enough to match this point.